NegativeNine's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[BWill's "In My Dreams"]

Definitely has potential

If I'm completely honest R&B isn't something I'm particularly in to but this is pretty easy listening. The beat is really good and compliments you rapping over it really well. Gotta say though that girl from high school singing kinda ruins the song a bit cause she can't hit her notes. Hit her up with a bit of auto-tune and maybe rap over her a bit and it'll be fixed.

I dunno if it's the style you're going for with your voice but a word of advice from me would be that your voice sounds a little lazy with the way you rap. Personally I think rap tends to me more emotional and easy to relate to when it's emotional and full of power both lyrically and vocally, in this song the lyrics are emotional but I don't quite believe it because of the way you're rapping it. That's just my two cents though.

But yeah, I like it, this is definitely a great first submission! Keep uploading :)

BWill9014 responds:

Thank you! and great advice =) I should of had the girl record her part again... she was goofing off a bit xD and ill try to put a little more emotion into my voice in my future songs... Thanks again

BWill

[Angels And Devils Dance]

The melody is from something I can't remember

Definitely heard this before somewhere but can't remember where so this get's a 6 from me. Not really dance imo.

doppler73 responds:

.....lame....

[[P] - Like a G6 (DubstepRemix)]

To all the people saying they love it...

...when they don't usually like dubstep that's cause this isn't strictly dubstep. It's much faster. I still like it but this isn't really dubstep (I'd call it substep haha)

Pezmobile responds:

I hope ur not telling me to stick to a stereotype of dubstep, all music has its variations and I'm just being creative. And actually its 138 bpm a tad slower than most dubstep songs.

Thanks for the review

[P]

[Peckham Terminator (Dubst]

The Video for this is Jokes

If you ask me you need more of the guys screaming "terminator" at him when he walks away from the bus

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Thanks for the review but you haven't actually given any feedback on the music itself :/

[CLOSER (Dubstep)]

My kind of dubstep!

At first, from the intro single synth, I was thinking this was gonna be some shit 5 second wub wub like alot of the other uploads. Then the voice sample came in and THEN you introduced that sick distortion wub!

Good job mate, great track, I might speed it up a little and / or put some more glitches in there to keep it interesting but other than that the quality is superb. Also nicely looped! 5/5 9/10 (not 10/10 cause I'm not too fond of the intro synth)

fearing responds:

Thanks a ton for your great review! Much appreciated and I'm glad you liked it. I'll take your crit into consideration for my next tracks :-]

again thanks.

[Ode to life-Boy503]

Very nice

Unique in it's own way, loving the melody. What piano synth do you use? 5's and 9's for you sir!

imaginelife responds:

Thanks! I didnt record it, i used garageband. I forget what I used though, sorry. Thanks for the awesome review

[Super Mario [dj-Smilee]]

Hmmmmm

"Well, if you read my part on the author comments, I clearly stated that my intention was to copy the real thing as much as possible. Thanks for your input though."

That's completely pointless though. Why upload this? If anyone wanted the original they could just download it. If you changed the instruments it'd be atleast worthy of an upload.

dj-Smilee responds:

I uploaded it to see if other people thought I did well at copying it.

[JBI - I'm Goin' Home!]

Excellent!

Brilliant production value! I'd love to know what program / synths you have such excellent control over! Would fit well in a film or something :)

10 5!

reel2 responds:

Fruity loops xxl 7! ^^ And thank you

[Choir Test]

Sounds brilliant!

The synth is excellent and this 15 second track shows it. Make a song out of it and it'll be worthy of an upload. It's a nice warlike melody and I like the held note at the bottom, brings alot of gravitas.

Revise and reupload :)

Prodigal responds:

Yay. I have a minute song already, this is just the small clip I just wanted to show everyone :P

It may be uploaded later in the week. I need to get a project done.

Thans for reviewing!

[Paabo - You Can't Outfox..]

It's ok

a bit empty for alot of the time, also again do you seriously think this is dance music?

xXBullxDozerXx responds:

Man I don't know what to tell you, what do you think dance music is? This is all old stuff I did a while ago, so it's not great stuff. But you don't need to fill each second of a song with noise to keep a listener listening. This one was a practice in trying to utilize negative space.